The gas mask just made it so I couldn't really understand him. It just seems odd to be wearing a gas mask all of the time, if anyone has done basic training they know what it is like to wear one. Just a side note, I really don't think an pellet gun should be used in a film like this, they are very small and I felt that it really took away from the realism which could exist.
I get that this is a low budget film. I think this has a cliché theme but there are a bunch of films which are so you potentially can take this idea and run with it. What you need is some expertise in some of the areas which this clip touches. Get some advice from military and paramilitary folk to get ideas. There is a lot which I felt could have been easily changed to add more because lets face it, two contractors or what ever they were wont just walk around in their drab all the time and nor will any soldier wear a gas mask unless its necessary
I am not a movie maker but this is my 2 cents. I think it needs to go back to the drawing board; less cheese, more realism, shorter more gripping clip.
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